The pie chart shows the main reasons why agricultural land become less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s
The pie chart presents the reasons behind agricultural
land
deterioration on the planet during the 1990s and the table compares all factors contributing to the phenomenon among three regions.
It is obvious that the agricultural Use synonyms
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degraded on the earth is mainly attributed to over-grazing, deforestation and over-cultivation, and Europe suffers more than other continents combined.
In terms of causes resulting in Use synonyms
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degradation, more than one-third of the acreage is degraded by the overconsumption of husbandry. It is almost the same for deforestation and farming, which causes 30% and 28% of degraded Use synonyms
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By contrast
, only 7% of the Linking Words
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is resulted from other contributors.
With regard to areas suffering from Use synonyms
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degradation, 23% of Use synonyms
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has been degraded in Europe, in which, the loss of forests accounts for 9.8%, followed by the impacts of agriculture and grazing, at 7.7% and 5.5% each. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, husbandry makes up for the majority of Linking Words
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degraded in Oceania (11.3%), Use synonyms
while
other factors are almost negligible. Linking Words
Lastly
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although
3.3% of the acreage under cultivation has been degraded by cultivation plants, the Linking Words
overall
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degraded in North America is the least proportion compared with the other regions.Use synonyms
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