The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides a detailed look at the process of recycling
glass
.
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Overall
, it is a man-made process divided into six cyclic phases, beginning with the trash bin and ending with the distribution to the market. We can Linking Words
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see that there is no limit to how many times Linking Words
glass
can be recycled and reused.
First of all, consumers need to segregate the used Use synonyms
glass
bottles from regular household waste and dispose of them in allocated recycle bins, from where they are transported to the recycling facility by large waste collection trucks.
At the treatment plant, Use synonyms
glass
is washed thoroughly and is made free of germs by placing it into washing and sterilizing equipment. Use synonyms
After
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, it is crushed into fine pieces and Linking Words
subsequently
melted. It is carried out in a crushing and melting machine to convert it to a soft liquid mass. The molten mixture is Linking Words
then
poured into moulds to make an item of desirable shape and standard size using a shaping machine. Once manufactured, these bottles are Linking Words
finally
loaded onto delivery trucks for distribution to retail outlets. And, that’s the how loop goes on repeatedly.Linking Words
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