The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provides a detailed look at the process of recycling
glass
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.
Overall
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, it is a man-made process divided into six cyclic phases, beginning with the trash bin and ending with the distribution to the market. We can
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see that there is no limit to how many times
glass
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can be recycled and reused. First of all, consumers need to segregate the used
glass
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bottles from regular household waste and dispose of them in allocated recycle bins, from where they are transported to the recycling facility by large waste collection trucks. At the treatment plant,
glass
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is washed thoroughly and is made free of germs by placing it into washing and sterilizing equipment.
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, it is crushed into fine pieces and
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melted. It is carried out in a crushing and melting machine to convert it to a soft liquid mass. The molten mixture is
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poured into moulds to make an item of desirable shape and standard size using a shaping machine. Once manufactured, these bottles are
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loaded onto delivery trucks for distribution to retail outlets. And, that’s the how loop goes on repeatedly.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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