Most young people without a partner would prefer to have a boyfriend or girlfriend. Yet being in a relationship when you are young is not always a good idea. As part of a class project, write about whether you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your choices.

Nowadays, there are numerous young people who

wants

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to have a boyfriend and a girlfriend.

However

, being in a

relationship

is not always a good choice. As

such

, there are merits and demerits to

this

idea,

although

I opine that its demerits outweigh the merits. I completely disagree

to

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this

idea, because having

relationship

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in

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such

of young age will bring numerous demerits

on

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children

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life

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. They will not focus on their study. There are several reasons to disagree with

this

idea. The predominant one is that children might not

emotionally

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mature

to

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handle the complexities of a

relationship

, and it can build numerous problems in the future.

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, they get

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on

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their study easily when they get disputing with their partner. Even though, being in

relationship

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means there is a person who

support

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us especially when we have issues.

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, having

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relatioship

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relationship

relationships

in

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such

young

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age will bring a lot

disaster

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because of immaturity.

In addition

, young people can concentrate on discovering their interests and building their character as

a

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individual until they are mature enough to start a

relationship

. If they are already mature enough as emotional to start a

relationship

, they would respect each other personal space in the

relationship

and help each other to grow better. In conclusion, Pursuing

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and upgrading their skill are the most important. Having a boyfriend or a girlfriend

in

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such

young

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age can give numerous obstacles for their future, especially if they cannot manage it well. In my opinion,

focusing

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on their future, and if they already

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themselves on their emotional aspect, they can start a

relationship

.