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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world
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The bar chart illustrates how the percentage of citizens living in
cities
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 has been changing over time in various parts of the world.
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, there seemed to be a common trend of citizens moving to urban centres over time in all the 5 above-listed countries. In 1950, Africa and Asia had the lowest number of
people
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 living in
cities
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whereas
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 in North
America
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 and Oceania, more than half of the
population
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 was residing in urban areas. Almost half of the Europeans and just below half of Latin Americans/Caribbeans were living in the
cities
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. Moving to the year 2007, there was a significant rise in the number of
people
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 from Africa and Asia who moved to
cities
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 (more than double). Around one-third of
people
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 in Europe and Latin
America
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/Caribbean shifted to the urban centres.
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, a smaller percentage of North American and Oceania residents were added to the
cities
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. By 2050,
this
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 transition seems to follow the same pattern where a majority of
people
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 will be found in
cities
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 especially in Europe, Latin
America
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/Caribbean, North
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AMerica
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America
 and Oceania where almost two-thirds of the whole
population
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 will contribute to the urban
population
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. In the other two parts ( Africa and Asia) approximately three-fourths of the total
population
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 will be moved to the
cities
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 by 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, people, america, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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