Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

The graph provides data

of

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hamburger

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hamburgers

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,

pizza

and fried

chicken

consumed by Mauritian teenagers between 1985 and 2015. In 1985,

pizza

was by far the most popular product with about 60 numbers of

times

eaten per week.

Hamburger

and Fried

chicken

were eaten in similar quantities, the first one was approximately 10

number of

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times

and the second one

is

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just below

of

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10.

However

, during

this

25-year period, there was a dramatic decrease

of

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in

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pizza

from 60 to 10 numbers of

times

. The consumption of

hamburger

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hamburgers

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and fried

chicken

showed an upward trend steadily till 2005, but the consumption of fried

chicken

increased much less significantly.

According to

the graph, in 2000 the chart illustrates the same level of consumption of all types of products

jus

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around 40

number of

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times

.

Overall

, it should

also

be mentioned that at the start of the period,

pizza

was the most popular fast food, which was replaced by

hamburger

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and fried

chicken

by 2015