You have seen a Tourist Board advert welcoming nominations for a 'Best City/Town Award.' Nominate your home city/town.
Write a letter to the Tourist Board. In your letter
• nominate your town/city and refer to its location
• explain what is special about your city/town
• say how winning an award would change your city/town
Dear Sir,
I am writing
letter to introduce the beauty of my city to you. My city is Rahim Yar Khan situated in the south
punjabChange the capitalization
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of Pakistan.
Rahim Yar Khan is like a small town with peaceful streets and
free Correct word choice
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of
pollutionReplace the word
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environment.
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The structure of your letter is not clearly defined. Ensure to incorporate a clear introductory paragraph, followed by body paragraphs that each address a specific point of the prompt, and then a concluding paragraph.
The letter lacks a formal closing. Include a complimentary close, such as 'Yours faithfully' or 'Yours sincerely,' along with your full name.
While you have started to address the prompt, the information given about your city is very brief and incomplete. Provide more detail about what makes your city special and explain how winning the award would impact it.
Ensure you maintain a formal tone throughout your letter. Avoid overly casual language and use formal salutations and closures.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.