The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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table

Provide

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information about

police

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the police

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budget during(2017-2018) (in

), in

diffrent

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different

three Sources (National

Gavornment

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government

, local taxes ,other

saurces

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resources

) in one area of Britain.

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, the

table

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illustrates

the dstribution one

mony

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money

, over(2017 and 2015) for (

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sales

technalgy

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technology

buildineg

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building

and transport )

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, the three groups of sources

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increases

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in the

table

. Hawarer, the

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buildings

building

and transport stay stable in same

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rate and

other two experienced some Changes. As it is

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, there

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striking Changes in

total

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(2017-2018) it is raised from (304 fm to 318.6fm).To compare, the first source in the

table

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around (2.3m) So, it was (175.5m) in 2017,

then

in 2018 reached (177.8m). The next source is local taxes

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grew

up comparing

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to 2017, which constituted (102.3m) in 2918. by far, the other sources go up around (0.5 )it Was (38m) in 2017 and in 2018(385

). The Pie Charts emerges the

stabilily

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stability

of buildings and transport which remand (17%) Over

2017and

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2017 and

2018.

On the other hand

, the technology had been improved around (6%) from 2017(8%) and 2018(14% ) .

While

the salaries (

afficers

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officers

and Staff) dropped in 2017 (75%) and in 2018(69%).

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2Word repetition
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3 paragraphs

193 words

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Fiscal allocations
Revenue streams
Budgetary oversight
Expenditure
Financial appropriation
Government grants
Local taxation
Operational costs
Capital investment
Public safety
Crime prevention
Community policing
Resource allocation
Year-on-year comparison
Budgetary constraints
Fiscal year
Fund disbursement
Budget deficit/surplus
Trend analysis
Financial sustainability
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