The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows four varieties
kinds
of recycling Change preposition
of kinds
materials
in a particular country. Use synonyms
Thi
Correct your spelling
The
materials
areUse synonyms
:
paper and cardboard, glass containers, Remove the comma
apply
aluminum
cans and plastic from 1982 to 2010. Change the spelling
aluminium
Overall
, there Linking Words
are
a fluctuation in the Change the verb form
is
per cent
of the Correct your spelling
percentage
materials
.
Looking into more details, the aluminium cans are increased dramatically, and Use synonyms
they
Correct your spelling
the
he
most striking figure was forty-five per cent in 2008. In the same way, the plastics Correct pronoun usage
apply
was
rising slowly, and the high figure was ten per cent in 2008.
The glass containers Change the verb form
were
was
declined from 1982 to 1988, after that, Unnecessary verb
apply
it's
gradually Unnecessary verb
it
inclined
until 2008. Verb problem
increased
The paper
and cardboard Correct article usage
Paper
were fluctuated
, Change to the active voice
fluctuated
have fluctuated
moreover
, it was the Linking Words
highes
Correct your spelling
highest
materials
in between the rest of the other three recycled Use synonyms
materials
, and Use synonyms
it's
decreased from 1992 to 2008.Unnecessary verb
it
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