The graph below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in various parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar charts depict the
the
rates of secondary and tertiary Remove the redundancy
apply
education
in 4 different regions by providing the percentage of school-aged students
.
The percentage of European
being educated surpasses all other countries by Replace the word
Europeans
both
the
educational level and Correct article usage
apply
genders
meanwhile that of Sub-Saharan Fix the agreement mistake
gender
African
is the lowest by Correct your spelling
Africa
both
categories.
For secondary education
, the proportion of secondary school European
students
significantly outnumber the other regions, namely 100% of female and 90% of male got educated. Meanwhile, The
Latin America and East Asia follow respectively, sharing a similar distribution with around half of the percentage of Correct article usage
apply
European
students
for both
gender
. Change to a plural noun
genders
Students
in Sub-Sahara Africa are least educated with around 10% of man
and 20% of women.
Meanwhile, the trend of the rate of higher Fix the agreement mistake
men
education
among people is striking similar to that for secondary education
. European
countries take the lead, having approximately 50% of both
sexes in schools. However
, even though the countries are ranked comparably as follow
: Latin America, East Asia and Sub-Sahara Africa, their counts are approximately 30%.Correct subject-verb agreement
follows
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