The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph gives information about the percentage

particular

Change preposition

of particular

show examples

countries between 1940

to

Correct word choice

and

show examples

2040. Units of measurement as a percentage.

Overall

Linking Words

, the share of the country's

population

Use synonyms

in

USA

Correct article usage

the USA

show examples

and Japan

have

Correct subject-verb agreement

has

show examples

increased over the period given. As it is shown by the chart, it can be clearly

seeing

Wrong verb form

seen

show examples

that

proportion

Correct article usage

the proportion

show examples

of the

population

Use synonyms

in Sweden experienced

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

significant growth. The

population

Use synonyms

of the United States has been

being

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

the highest for the entire study period from 1940 to 1980. It has increased from about 9% to 15%,

however

Linking Words

by 2020 it has slightly decreased by 13%.

Moreover

Linking Words

, a

rapidly

Change the adverb

rapid

show examples

growth to 23% will occur by about 2040 A glance at the graph reveals that the

population

Use synonyms

of Japan aged 65 and over in 2025 will

be

Verb problem

apply

show examples

sharply

climbed

Wrong verb form

climb

show examples

to 25%, but between 1940 and 1990 it has moderately gone down from about 5% to 3%. Another line graph

which

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

shown

Wrong verb form

shows

show examples

Sweden a

dramatically

Change the adverb

dramatic

show examples

upsurge to 25%

all

Correct determiner usage

apply

show examples

of

Change preposition

in

show examples

the period .