The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates information about
yearly
incomes of three different bakeriesCorrect article usage
the yearly
like
: Barnie's Buns, Lovely Change preposition
apply
Loaves
and Robie
's Bakery
in London, over 10 year period
.
Overall
, it could be seen that Robie
's Bakery
had a
highest income, Change the article
the
while
the last
place is Lovely Loaves
. In
the end of the Change the preposition
At
period
the Lovely Add a comma
period,
Loaves
switched place
with Bernie's Fix the agreement mistake
places
Bakery
.
To begin
with, the most interesting thing is that, Robie
's Bakery
was stable in
Change preposition
for
period
of 5 years, Add an article
a period
the period
with
earning about 55.000 pounds per year. Change preposition
apply
In addition
to
, Change preposition
apply
Robie
's Bakery
grew dramatically fast in 2007 to 2008. Another striting
thing Correct your spelling
striking
that
the earnings of Add a missing verb
is that
the
Bernie's Buns began Correct article usage
apply
with
20.000 pounds merely. Having dropped slightly to 2002 in 2001, Change preposition
at
then
Bernie's Rephrase
apply
Buns
Change noun form
Bun's
Buns'
anual
earnings almost doubled Correct your spelling
annual
with
39.000 pounds.
Turning to, the Lovely Change preposition
to
Loaves
flactuated
between 2000 and 2004. Despite, Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
went
up Wrong verb form
going
considerbly
, decreased dramatically in the given Correct your spelling
considerably
period
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