The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the information about how much money
is
spent on many purposes in one week in 1968 and 2018. The figures are given in percentages.
Wrong verb form
was
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that, most families used
their income on food in 1968 Verb problem
spent
while
spent on leisure activities in 2018.
In 1968, the highest percentage of income were
spent on food with 35%, followed by housing and clothing and Change the verb form
was
footware
, with the figure being the same number at 10%. Correct your spelling
footwear
However
, there were significant changes in 2018, the percentage of food and clothing and footware
declined Correct your spelling
footwear
into
the half number Change preposition
to
of
1968. In Change preposition
in
contrary
, housing was increased to 20%.
For Correct your spelling
contrast
house hold
goods, there were not any changes Correct your spelling
household
with
the percentage. Leisure time was not popular in 1968 but rose Change preposition
in
into
the highest number at 23% in 2018, came after with housing which was still the second same in 1968.Change preposition
to
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