You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates how many people visited a museum in the United Kingdom in 2003, and compares the data between
summer
and winter. The graph shows in average number
of visitors
.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that quantity of visitors
was at a peak between 11 and 12 o'clock, and is clear that there were more visitors
in summer
than in winter.
Considering the number
of visitors
in summer
, it rose significantly from around 300 visitors
to just above 1000 visitors
in 1 hour, 9 a.m
. to 10 a.m
. It seemed to be at peak in
around 11:30 a.Change preposition
at
m
. at nearly 1500 visitors
, then
it fell steadily to nearly 800 visitors
at 4 p.m
. After that, the number
of visitors
dropped dramatically until there was
no more Change the verb form
were
visitors
at 6 p.m
.
Compared to winter, it seemed to be similar to summer
, which started to rise steadily from around 200 visitors
at 9 a.m
. to around 500 visitors
at 10 a.m
. Then
, the trend seemed to be uptrend with a sideway pattern until reached a peak at nearly 600 visitors
around 11:30 a.m
. After that, it decreased moderately until the number
of visitor was 0 in just before 3 p.m
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Vocabulary: Replace the words summer, number, visitors, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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