The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line graph illustrates how many people visited a museum in the United Kingdom in 2003, and compares the data between

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and winter. The graph shows in average

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of

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, it can be seen from the graph that quantity of

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was at a peak between 11 and 12 o'clock, and is clear that there were more

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in

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than in winter. Considering the

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of

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in

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, it rose significantly from around 300

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to just above 1000

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in 1 hour, 9 a.

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. to 10 a.

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. It seemed to be at peak

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around 11:30 a.

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. at nearly 1500

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,

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it fell steadily to nearly 800

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at 4 p.

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. After that, the

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of

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dropped dramatically until there

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no more

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at 6 p.

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. Compared to winter, it seemed to be similar to

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, which started to rise steadily from around 200

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at 9 a.

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. to around 500

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at 10 a.

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, the trend seemed to be uptrend with a sideway pattern until reached a peak at nearly 600

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around 11:30 a.

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. After that, it decreased moderately until the

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of visitor was 0 in just before 3 p.

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.