You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates how many people visited a museum in the United Kingdom in 2003, and compares the data between
summer
and winter. The graph shows in average
number
of
visitors
.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that quantity of
visitors
was at a peak between 11 and 12 o'clock, and is clear that there were more
visitors
in
summer
than in winter. Considering the
number
of
visitors
in
summer
, it rose significantly from around 300
visitors
to just above 1000
visitors
in 1 hour, 9 a.
m
. to 10 a.
m
. It seemed to be at peak
in
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at
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around 11:30 a.
m
. at nearly 1500
visitors
,
then
it fell steadily to nearly 800
visitors
at 4 p.
m
. After that, the
number
of
visitors
dropped dramatically until there
was
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were
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no more
visitors
at 6 p.
m
. Compared to winter, it seemed to be similar to
summer
, which started to rise steadily from around 200
visitors
at 9 a.
m
. to around 500
visitors
at 10 a.
m
.
Then
, the trend seemed to be uptrend with a sideway pattern until reached a peak at nearly 600
visitors
around 11:30 a.
m
. After that, it decreased moderately until the
number
of visitor was 0 in just before 3 p.
m
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words summer, number, visitors, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Peak season
  • Off-peak season
  • Visitor influx
  • Steady increase
  • Significant drop
  • Month-on-month comparison
  • Seasonal variation
  • Cultural attraction
  • Tourism trends
  • Historical data
  • Visitor demographics
  • Analytical observation
  • Comparative analysis
  • Statistical evidence
  • Conclusive summary
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