The table below describes water usage for 3 different purposes in 6 countries in 2003.
The table above indicates the
water
usage
percentage within six countries from four different continents in 2003, which are Canada, United Kingdom, China, Australia
, India and Japan. The consumption of the
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water
were
divided into three categories : Domestic, Industrial and Agricultural.
The data shows that the countries that used the Change the verb form
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water
mostly for Agricultural needs were the United Kingdom with 90%, China with 87%, India with 82% and Japan with 66%. While their
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for Domestic and Industrial needs, averaging Change the verb form
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, Australia
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were using most of their water
Domestic needs, with 65% and 63% respectively. While
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in
33%, Canada Change preposition
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for Industrial needs as their second priority, on
32%.
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the table were using their Change preposition
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water
for Agricultural needs, followed by Domestic usage
and Industrial usage
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