The graph shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012

The graph shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012
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The line graph compares the
production
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of electricity in France over the period of 32 years (1980 – 2012).
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, the amount of electricity produced from nuclear
power
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was highest
while
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renewable energy
production
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was lowest. The 1980 –
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production
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the production
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of nuclear and hydroelectric
power
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were
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the same (about 70
terawatt
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hours
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). In the same year, there were around 120
terawatt
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hours
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of thermal electricity was produced and renewables were not produced. 5 years later, nuclear energy increased sharply to about 200 and was the main resource in France. Since 1985, nuclear
power
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has grown constantly and reached
the
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peak of 430
terawatt
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hours
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.
By contrast
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, the figure for thermal
power
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declined to about 50
terawatt
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hours
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in 2012 and remained unchanged for the rest of the period. The number of renewables from 1980 to 2012 rose slightly.
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period saw a minimal fall in hydroelectric
power
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production
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(from about 70 to 50
terawatt
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hours
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).
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