The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph explains
about
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the shift of the estimated maximum
number
of
Asian
elephants
in 9
Asian
nations in the span of 7 years from 1997 to 2004. It is shown on the graph that
India
had the highest
number
of
elephants
population
of almost 10000 in the year 1997.
On the other hand
, Myanmar, the
second highest
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Asian
country in the same year, recorded about half of the
elephants
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population
in
India
amounting to about 5000
elephants
, followed by Thailand with approximately 4000
population
of
the
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elephants
.
Moreover
, Malaysia and Sri Lanka had about 3000
elephants
. Other countries
such
as Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos and China estimated less than 2000
elephants
. In the year 2004,
India
remained the
Asian
nation which had the highest
number
of
elephants
population
with around 7500
elephants
nationwide, followed by Myanmar with almost 5000
elephants
.
Overall
, the graph shows the decrease in the
number
of
elephants
population
from 1997 to 2004 in
India
, Myanmar, Thailand, Vietnam, Malaysia, Sri Lanka and China.
In contrast
, the
population
of
elephants
in Cambodia slightly
increase
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,
while
the
number
of
elephants
population
in Laos remained
in
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about 1000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, asian, elephants, india, population with synonyms.
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