The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph explains
about
the shift of the estimated maximum Change preposition
apply
number
of Asian
elephants
in 9 Asian
nations in the span of 7 years from 1997 to 2004.
It is shown on the graph that India
had the highest number
of elephants
population
of almost 10000 in the year 1997. On the other hand
, Myanmar, the second highest
Add a hyphen
second-highest
Asian
country in the same year, recorded about half of the elephants
Change the noun form
elephant
population
in India
amounting to about 5000 elephants
, followed by Thailand with approximately 4000 population
of the
Correct article usage
apply
elephants
. Moreover
, Malaysia and Sri Lanka had about 3000 elephants
. Other countries such
as Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos and China estimated less than 2000 elephants
.
In the year 2004, India
remained the Asian
nation which had the highest number
of elephants
population
with around 7500 elephants
nationwide, followed by Myanmar with almost 5000 elephants
.
Overall
, the graph shows the decrease in the number
of elephants
population
from 1997 to 2004 in India
, Myanmar, Thailand, Vietnam, Malaysia, Sri Lanka and China. In contrast
, the population
of elephants
in Cambodia slightly increase
, Wrong verb form
increased
while
the number
of elephants
population
in Laos remained in
about 1000.Change preposition
at
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