The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented pie charts demonstrate the percentage of mobile devices that were used in Canada in the years between 2009 and 2019.
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, it is clear from the first pie chart that the proportion of 'Conventional TV' was the most utilized gadget in 2009 and the second one despite having a small proportion in 2009, 'Mobile phone' and 'Flat-screen TV' grew noticeably in 2019.
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with 'Conventional TV', accounted for 34% in 2009, but despite being a significant level, it decreased dramatically to 4% in 2019.
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, we can see a decline in the usage of 'Desktop computers' and 'Laptops', they were 18% and 20% in 2009,
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, after a decade, both machines justified 12%. Looking at increases in usage, the quantity of 'Mobile phones', 'Flat-screen TVs, and 'Tablet' rose substantially. By 2019 there was a significant increase in 'Mobile phones'( reaching 27%), 'Flat-screen TVs'(at 26%), and 'Tablets'(at 19%), making notable growth from their 2009 figures of 8%, 15%, and 5%, respectively.
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