The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.
The graph shows how many parcels were delivered by two main companies ,namely TNT and
Fedex
between 1920 and 2000.
Overall
, it is clear that
there were considerable increases in the number of parcels delivered by both companies .Additionally
, it is also
worth mentioning that TNT was the largest sector and the figure
overtook that of FedEx
at the end
,despite being the smallest point at the beginning.
Initially
, in 1920, FedEx
was the most dominant mail company in delivering parcels with 15.000. After rising sharply to 20.000 during the first 20 years,the figure
fell briefly to around 12,500 in 1950.The figure
, however
, started to improve again with slight fluctuations and had reached well below 20.000 by the last
year.
Turning to the latter, the figure
was quite opposite to the tendency of the Fedex
company .The figure
for TNT stood out as the smallest sector ,on the other hand
, accounted for 5.000 in the first year then
quintupled at the end
of the period before remaining stable at approximately 11.000 between 1960 and 1980.Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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