The table below describes water usage for 3 different purposes in 6 countries in 2003.

The table compares the consumption rate of

water

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in domestic,

inustrial

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industrial

and

agricultur

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agricultural

in six different

countries

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Overall

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, most

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apply

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the

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apply

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countries

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use

the

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apply

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water

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for agricultural

reason

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reasons

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with the least usage

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for

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Industrial purposes. For

the

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apply

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Domastic

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Domestic

reasons

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reasons,

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Canda

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Canada

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and Australia were the only

countries

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that

spend

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spent

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more than half of the

water

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supply.

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, other

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countries

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countries'

country's

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percentage

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percentages

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range from 19-

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to 5

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% in

this

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catogory

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

129 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

water consumption
domestic usage
industrial usage
agricultural usage
cubic meters
per capita
water-intensive industries
sustainable water management
irrigation practices
efficient water use
developed vs developing nations
water scarcity
desalination
water footprint
resource allocation

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The table below describes water usage for 3 different purposes in 6 countries in 2003.

Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to a workplace every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Education for young people is important in many countries. However, some people think that the government should spend more money on education for the adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree.