Some people think that economy progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors,do you think are most important?

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Economy
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The economy
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is a primitive factor to
assess
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any
country
's
sucess
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success
; if the
economy
is higher,
revenues
would be higher too. Some economists have firm believe that generating high
revenues
are the only factor to
measures
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success,
however
, I
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there are some other
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fields
files
too
thats
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that
helps
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help
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to boost
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the contry's
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contry's
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country's
spirit and
sucess
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success
which are discussed in the following paragraphs
along with
my opinion. To commence with, the
economy
of any
country
is considered the prime factor to measure
sucess
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success
; if the
revenues
are higher,
infrastructure
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the infrastructure
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and basic
amenties
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amenities
of that
country
would be greater in comparison to the developing
country
. To illustrate, the United States is considered the most powerful
country
throughout the universe, as
its
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creates high
revenues
and most companies like Apple and Google established their headquarters in
US
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the US
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as it is capable
to
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of
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faciliate
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facilitating
such
companies in funding to grow or invest
further
.
Moreover
, if the
economy
of a nation is higher, the residents of that
country
would be better
accessible
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to basic amenities like
eduction
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education
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, medical and
infrastructure
.
On the other hand
, there are many other factors like health care, education, sports and
infrastructure
also
assiciated
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associated
with the
sucess
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success
of a nation.
For instance
, Australia is quite famous in sports as most of its residents play games; Australian cricketers won
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the
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World Cup
in
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apply
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this
year which brought
pretigious
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prestige
and respect to the
country
. Apart from that,
health
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the health
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care of a
country
also
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is also
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imperative to measure
sucess
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success
. To summarize,
although
,
economy
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the economy
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is imperative to suceed,
however
, I firmly believe,
health
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that health
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care, education and
infrastructure
also
are equally important to assess
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the sucess
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sucess
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success
of any
country
.
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