In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in water, so people think that they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or dis-agree?

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use
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plastic
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bags
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are the main cause of
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problems and stop
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. In fact,
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agree with
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perspective that
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shopping
bags
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leads
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to land and
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pollution and should be banned. First and
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foremost,
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bag
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are
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common
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use
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by society to bring
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items for centuries. People
use
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plastic
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bag because it is cheap, easy to find,
convinient
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convenient
and simple.
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habit tends to make a bigger matter in the future or even a
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catastrophe if the
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waste
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not well
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or recycled.
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pursue to separate their organic and
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waste
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every day,
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all the
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will mixed in trash and hard to
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trash
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, sometimes end up in the river
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clog the
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flow
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could be
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one of the factor
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flood disaster happened.
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plastic
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bag
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bags
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need a hundred years to
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by
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microorganisms
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and create a mountain of
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waste
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in
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centre. In
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,
plastic
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contains hazardous
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chemicals
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that could harsh our land and impact
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apply
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the quality of soil
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used for
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. Because of that, our edible plant can
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and dangerous to be eaten by humans. To illustrate,
crop
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which
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cultivated around trash
center
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are more vulnerable experience bad growth and
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. If
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vegetable
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consumed it can lead to health
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issues
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. In
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,
plastic
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bags
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waste
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are
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considered not only
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water
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pollution but
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to contribute
land
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contamination. I,
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, remain firmly convinced that
plastic
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bags
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should be not used anymore in the future.
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