Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with.
Nowadays, many
people
is
interested in exploring new Change the verb form
are
things
such
as travelling to new places, eating variety
of cuisines to Add an article
a variety
experience
new things
in their life. However
, some people
feels
that doing activities that Change the verb form
feel
involves
repetitions are more calming and comfortable for them. In Change the verb form
involve
this
essay, I will try to examine this
two behaviours.
On the one hand, exploring new Correct determiner usage
these
things
they have never done before is a unique experience
for everyone because it lets you go out of you
comfort zone. Correct pronoun usage
your
Additionally
, people
that
is
enthusiastic Change the verb form
are
on
searching for new Change preposition
about
experience
will have a greater will to adapt to new things
. For example
, people
that have a habit of doing actions that they never have done before has a higher chance in
surviving in conditions they have never felt before because of their past Change preposition
of
experience
navigating through difficult
time. Add an article
a difficult
Thus
, I believe individuals that are brave enough to step out of their comfort zone are going to better managing
hard conditions.
Change the verb
manage
On the other hand
, people
that
have a habit of Correct pronoun usage
who
repetitions
are more kin of their work as they are more comfortable doing it. Fix the agreement mistake
repetition
This
is the result of constant exposure to a certain activity or muscle memory that Correct subject-verb agreement
has
have
been exposed to them. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
As a result
, this
type of individuals
Fix the agreement mistake
individual
have
formed a habit so they have a harder time changing their Change the verb form
has
everday
movement. Correct your spelling
everyday
For example
, someone that
has formed an addiction Correct pronoun usage
who
toward
something needs therapy to to get them healed from their Change preposition
to
addictions
Fix the agreement mistake
addiction
such
as gambling or playing games. Hence
, things
that are familiar to them could give them more happiness and joy.
In conclusion, there is
two types of Change the verb form
are
people
the one that likes to do new things
and the other one who enjoys the usual things
.Submitted by jedidia.husodo on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Achievement
Ensure subject-verb agreement within sentences to maintain grammatical accuracy.
Coherence & Cohesion
In the introduction, clearly state your main points to provide a roadmap for the reader.
Coherence & Cohesion
Utilize a wider range of cohesive devices to better link ideas and concepts.
Coherence & Cohesion
Avoid repetitive sentence structures to enhance readability and engagement.
Task Achievement
Include more precise and vivid examples to support your points effectively.
Coherence & Cohesion
Conclude the essay by summarizing the main points and your opinion to provide a clear ending.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?