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Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

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Dear jee, I hope
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 letter finds you well.I am writing
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 letter very happy. I finished my
presentation
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 yesterday. I think you know my
presentation
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 topic. But I again remember that. ‘’how to effect coronavirus at our country’s economic level’’.
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, thank Jee for your help. Without your book, I
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 not finished my
presentation
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 very well.
This
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presentation
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 was very important to me. Because
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 is my final year’s
last
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 project. It was 8 gradits. So I
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short
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 time for preparation. I really was confused . I do not know how to finish my
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.
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, I searched for some statistics about my
presentation
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 heading on Google. I wrote some summaries. I do not finish. After your book came, I finished my slides in one day. Really I feel very happy. I got passed grades at my university level. I never forgot your support
Jee
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, Jee
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. Faithfully , Mathusha.p

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coherence cohesion
Ensure paragraphs are well-structured and maintain a logical flow throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Use a proper opening and closing salutation in your letter, such as 'Dear [Name]' and 'Yours sincerely/faithfully,' followed by your full name.
coherence cohesion
Organize the content into clear paragraphs: one for each bullet point in the task.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task in your letter, ensuring that each bulleted point is covered adequately.
task achievement
Use a more formal and consistent tone appropriate for a letter thanking a colleague.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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