Some believe advertisement is useful and informative. Others think it is false and helps to raise prices. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern era advertising is a very common issue, every company promotes their
products
on online and offline news for selling purposes. Some community claim that it a very impactful for getting better products
and also
getting the perfect knowledge of those products
, on the other hand
, some amount of people
believe that promoting a product in online and offline media
is a scam and only increase the prices of those products
. I partially agree that advertising has a positive side, and I also
claim that it has some negative effects.
To begin
with I want to mention that there are a lot of products
available in the market
, when promotional ads
people
are seeing on the media
they get the perfect information about the products
and they receive the perfect products
from the market
. for
example
one of my friends bought a phone from the market
and he saw an ad for that phone on tv, In that ad he got the perfect information about why the phone was best. Another important fact is that, when a person travels to another country he searches the information on social media
to perfect hotels for him. Then
there are a high number of options shown by the media
then
he gets the chance to choose the perfect hotel for him. This
is possible for the advertisement, if there are no ads
available the man cannot get the perfect hotels for him.
On the other part, some negative issues are happening, like some companies claiming that they are best in the ads
, but they don't
provide the perfect things for their customers. For
example
, some e-commerce companies don't
provide the perfect products
, but in ads
, they claim they are providing the best products
. Another important example
is that, with those kids of TV ads
they unusually raise the prices of their products
, they promote their products
with a celebrity person then
people
believe that it is expensive products
, but the products
are not that expensive. For
example
, people
buy an expensive car because of celebrity told them that this
is the best, on the market
the same car has a cheap price with another company but they don't
have promotions.
In conclusion, I want to say that there is a positive side if we choose the perfect products
from advertising, but if we don't
do that we can't
get the positive things.Submitted by ilhanctg2019 on
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