The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.
The picture displays the
steps
that how to make coffee
from beans
.
Making coffee
follows 11 steps
in total. Coffee
beans
are picked from plants by hand in the beginning step
. Then
, they need to be dried under the sun. After
this
, they are roasted by the roaster. After roasting them, they are cooled rapidly in the refrigerator. Following
this
step
, coffee
beans
are ground by the grinder. After that, they are mixed and soaked in hot water. After
this
step
, they are stained from the water. The next
step
is to freeze the mixture in the freezer. Interestingly, they have to be ground
the frozen liquid Wrong verb form
grind
by
the grinder. Change preposition
with
After
this
step
, they are dried in a vacuum until the water disappears. The final step
is packed
them into jars.
Change the verb form
to pack
Overall
, grinding and drying happen more times than other steps
and they are reminding steps
when making coffee
. The most important material is coffee
beans
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