The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts below show the proportions of spending in a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
, it is clever
that the main proportion of Correct word choice
clear
expenditures
was Fix the agreement mistake
expenditure
teachers
' salaries
and the least amount of money was spent on insurance in all three years.
Starting with the earliest year, 1981, teachers
' salaries
was 40% of a
total school spending , Correct article usage
the
while
for other workers salaries
was spent 28%. For furnitures
& Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
equipments
and recourses, like books, was spent 15%. And Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
the
Capitalize word
The
least
expenditure on insurance was Correct word choice
lowest
spent
2% and Verb problem
apply
this
index was
increased by 1% in 1991. Expenditure for Unnecessary verb
apply
teachers
' salaries
and recources
increased by 10% and 5% respectively, Correct your spelling
resources
while
for other workers' salaries
and furnitures
showed Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
decrease
Add an article
a decrease
by
6% and 10% respectively. In 1991, Change preposition
of
teachers
began to be paid 5% less than in the previous decade. Decrease
Add an article
The decrease
also
can be noticed on
the indexes of other workers' Change preposition
in
salaries
and recources
which Correct your spelling
resources
were
dropped by 7% and 11% respectively. Expenditure for Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct your spelling
equipment
equipments
and insurance showed Correct your spelling
equipment
Correct article usage
a rise
rise
Correct article usage
a rise
Change preposition
of
by
17% and 5%.Change preposition
of
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers, salaries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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