Some people say that children should play games which require teamwork such as football and basketball whereas, some think they should be doing individual sports such as swimming and running. Do you agree or disagree?

In

this

contemporary epoch,

sports

are crucial for

children

to stay fit and healthy.

However

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there are two predominantly contrasting views

whereas

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a section of society claims that

kids

must be indulged in

such

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games

which need teamwork like football and basketball

while

others emphasize that

kids

should do individual

sports

activities namely swimming and running.I agree

to

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the notion that

kids

should do both

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of

games

. Apparently,playing

games

should be

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task each day for teenagers whether

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plethora of players

are

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required.If

children

are engaged in playing

footbal

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football

and basketball ,they can improve their efficiency in a team.

For example

,

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adolescents

can build strong relationships

among

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each other.

Secondly

,

kids

may learn teamwork qualities if they prefer to play football and basketball.

For instance

,players can acquire how to play in a team? and they can

also

build leadership qualities among themselves.

On the other hand

,playing

sports

individually would be beneficial for myriad reasons.Chiefly,

children

will enhance their confidence if they do

sports

such

as swimming and running individually.To cite an example,

children

who

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participate in swimming and running ,

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can become more confident and

become

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bold.

Moreover

,

children

can learn how to become a responsible person in life.

For example

,

kids

who play any

games

on their own ,are more accountable than others.

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i

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firmly believe that players must play in both ways.They should give preference to

sports

which require teamwork ,leadership,confidence,

energy

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.

Hence

toddlers may learn a wide range of skills.