You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own.write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your Letter: -Introduce yourself -say why you are interested in this sports club - ask some questions about the club. e.g facilities, members, costs
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Dear Sir or Madam
l am writing
this
letter to ask for information about the Nur fitness sport club
. I full name is gulibonu Samadova.I am studying at the western college.My college does not provide any sports facilities as of yet. However
,l found new
Add an article
a new
club
to be the nearest sports club
and would like to requst
more Correct your spelling
request
date
about it.
The information I would like to obtain should include Correct your spelling
data
following
: Correct article usage
the following
Firstly
I would like to know about course's
price. Correct article usage
the course's
Secondly
I would be interested to know how big the gym area is and what types of equipment are available. Add a comma
Secondly,
Lastly
I wonder what kind of membership the Add a comma
Lastly,
club
offers. You can contact me on my mobile phone number which is 3435535. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your
faithfully (133 words)Correct pronoun usage
Yours
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logical structure
Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, development, and conclusion. The current letter's structure can be improved with a more distinct closing paragraph.
greeting and closing
Include a formal closing with your full name since 'Your faithfully' is incomplete without it.
single idea per paragraph
Maintain the focus on a single idea in each paragraph and clearly separate the paragraphs.
complete response
The task is completed with relevant details about the sports club information needed. To enhance, you can expand on the reasons for your interest in the club and how it will benefit your physical or academic life.
suitable writing tone
While the tone is relatively formal and appropriate for a letter to a manager, you can enhance the politeness and formality by adding please when making requests, avoiding contractions, and ensuring a more formal sign-off.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.