The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of
people
from five different age
groups
in a country coming to a
cinema
at least one time a month in the
year
1978 to 2008.
Overall
, the
groups
of
people
from 14 to 24
years
old visiting the
cinema
contributed the highest
percentage
while
the opposite was true in the oldest
group
, over 50
years
old.
Moreover
, there were increasing trends in the
percentage
of
people
from
groups
of 14 to 24
years
old and over 50
years
old. In the first
year
, there were over 90% of
people
from 14 to 24
years
old coming to the
cinema
, which was twice as high as the
percentage
of
people
over 50
years
old.
However
, the proportion of 14 to 24-
year
-olds visiting the
cinema
remained unchanged in the period and finished at under 90% in 2008.
On the contrary
, the oldest
group
experienced a significant increase, hitting the bottom at 30% in 1998,
then
soared by more than 20% in the
last
year
of the period. It is noticeable that
due to
the shapely surge, the over 50
years
old
group
contributed the lowest after 30
years
. Looking at the rest, the
percentage
of
people
in the 25 to 34
years
old
group
showed a sharp fluctuation, beginning at 80% and finishing nearly at the same level.
In particular
, the
year
1993 witnessed the same portion of the age of 14 to 24
years
old and 25 to 34
years
old
groups
, with over 60%.
However
, there was a huge difference between these
groups
that the
percentage
of the older
group
recorded an increase, from 60% to nearly 70% in 30
years
.
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