The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of
people
from five different age Use synonyms
groups
in a country coming to a Use synonyms
cinema
at least one time a month in the Use synonyms
year
1978 to 2008.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
groups
of Use synonyms
people
from 14 to 24 Use synonyms
years
old visiting the Use synonyms
cinema
contributed the highest Use synonyms
percentage
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while
the opposite was true in the oldest Linking Words
group
, over 50 Use synonyms
years
old. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there were increasing trends in the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
from Use synonyms
groups
of 14 to 24 Use synonyms
years
old and over 50 Use synonyms
years
old.
In the first Use synonyms
year
, there were over 90% of Use synonyms
people
from 14 to 24 Use synonyms
years
old coming to the Use synonyms
cinema
, which was twice as high as the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
over 50 Use synonyms
years
old. Use synonyms
However
, the proportion of 14 to 24-Linking Words
year
-olds visiting the Use synonyms
cinema
remained unchanged in the period and finished at under 90% in 2008. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, the oldest Linking Words
group
experienced a significant increase, hitting the bottom at 30% in 1998, Use synonyms
then
soared by more than 20% in the Linking Words
last
Linking Words
year
of the period. It is noticeable that Use synonyms
due to
the shapely surge, the over 50 Linking Words
years
old Use synonyms
group
contributed the lowest after 30 Use synonyms
years
.
Looking at the rest, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
in the 25 to 34 Use synonyms
years
old Use synonyms
group
showed a sharp fluctuation, beginning at 80% and finishing nearly at the same level. Use synonyms
In particular
, the Linking Words
year
1993 witnessed the same portion of the age of 14 to 24 Use synonyms
years
old and 25 to 34 Use synonyms
years
old Use synonyms
groups
, with over 60%. Use synonyms
However
, there was a huge difference between these Linking Words
groups
that the Use synonyms
percentage
of the older Use synonyms
group
recorded an increase, from 60% to nearly 70% in 30 Use synonyms
years
.Use synonyms
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