The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The two maps give information about several changes happening on an
island
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because of the construction of some tourist facilities.
It is clear that
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the erection of new facilities has completely created a new appearance for the
island
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, from an original wilderness to a well-supplied recreational landscape. At
first,
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the
island
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was pristine, consisting of mostly nothing but a few jungles in the Middle East and Middle West and a beach on the western coast. The total length of the
island
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is approximately 250 metres. After tourist facilities are constructed, the
island
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experiences considerable changes. Visitors set their first step on
this
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island
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at a pier emerging on the south,
then
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visit a reception right at the centre, circled by a vehicle track which
also
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leads to a restaurant on the north. The east and west of
this
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island
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show the mushrooming of accommodations, with footpaths connecting dwellings so that tourists can easily go around.
In particular
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, a new swimming area is developed on the west, taking advantage of the original beach.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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