The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.
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The graph illustrates information about the percentages of the
population
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living in urban areas that differed between six continents (Africa, Europe, etc.) in the years 1950–2050.
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, the changes in percentages of
population
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in urban areas have distinct rates from each other. It is crystal clear that the lowest rate of
population
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in 1950 was observed in Africa,
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the highest level of
population
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was seen in North America in the same year.
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, the highest and lowest levels belonged to the same continents in 2007. Taking a closer look at the bar graph, the percentage of the African
population
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in urban areas was only 15% in 1950 and doubled in 2007.
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, the
population
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is forecast to rise to 60% in 2050.
On the other hand
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, in North America, the ratio was
initially
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four times higher than in Africa.
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, it rose by 15% in 2007. It is assumed that it will reach a peak of 90% in 2050. When it comes to other continents, particularly Asia and Latin America, there was a substantial growth of the
population
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, respectively, by 25% and 35% from 1950 to 2007.
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, there was a slight upward trend of only 9
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in Oceania during the same years.
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, the percentage of the
population
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will be moving upward until 2050.
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