The line graph shows information about the salary of three sports received on a yearly basis over a period of 31 years from 1970 to 2000.
The graph shows how much amount of footballers
money
was earned by different sportsmen between 1970 and 2000.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
there were significant growths in the amount of earnings for each Linking Words
players
. Change to a singular noun
player
Additionally
, it is Linking Words
also
worth mentioning that basketball made up the largest proportion of Linking Words
money
over the shown Use synonyms
period
.
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Initially
, basketball players earned relatively little Linking Words
money
with around 50.000 Use synonyms
dollars
and reached about 250.000 Use synonyms
dollars
in the first 10 years.Use synonyms
However
, the figure increased rapidly to well below 2.500.000 Linking Words
dollars
and became a new leader Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
.
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Conversely
, despite being dominant at Linking Words
first,
the remaining sectors,baseball and football players made Linking Words
small
amount of Add an article
a small
money
compared to their counterparts over the given Use synonyms
period
.The figure for both baseballers and footballers grew moderately from approximately 200.000 Use synonyms
dollars
and 150.000 Use synonyms
dollars
to just above 150.000 Use synonyms
dollars
and 750.000 Use synonyms
dollars
respectively during a Use synonyms
70- year
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70-year
period
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the figureChange preposition
apply
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for
remaining
unchanged.Wrong verb form
remained
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, period, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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