The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The trends illustrate a variety
types
of air pollutants in England from the year 1990 to 2005.In overview, all sources Change preposition
of types
such
as Transport, Industry, Total Air Pollutants and Households experienced a decline over the whole period of time.
Linking Words
To begin
with, both transport and households started at about one million tonnes of air Linking Words
polluters
, Replace the word
pollution
meanwhile
households Add a comma
meanwhile,
flactuated
until it Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
hitting
the lowest point in 2005 which Change the form of the verb
hit
is
zero Wrong verb form
was
tonne
.Change to a plural noun
tonnes
Furthermore
, the average of those who pollute oxygen, in the beginning Linking Words
it
was Correct pronoun usage
apply
at
seven in 1990, Change preposition
apply
then
after a sharp decrease in 1999 it reached 4 million tonnes.
Linking Words
Additionally
, in industry, there was Linking Words
also
decreasing from around 5.5 million tonnes to 2 000 000 in a time of 15 yearsLinking Words
Submitted by cajaah93 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼