The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the population living in cities of four Southeast Asian
countries
from 1970 to 2020.
In addition
, the graph illustrates the predictions for 2030 and 2040. In general, there were fluctuations in people living in cities compared to the total population. In 1970, the
Philippines
had the most
citizens
among other
countries
.
However
,
Malaysia
surpassed the
Philippines
after 50 years.
In addition
,
Malaysia
is predicted to have the most
citizens
among others. The number of
citizens
grew from 1970 to 1990 in all
countries
, especially the
Philippines
. Urbanisation occurred in the
Philippines
from 1980 to 1990, the increase was approximately 20%. The
citizens
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of the
Philippines
dropped for 2 years and was surpassed by
Malaysia
in 1990.
While
Malaysia
experienced sharp growth of almost 15% in 1990,
Thailand
remained stable and
Indonesia
grew slowly. In 2000,
citizens
percentage of
Indonesia
was the same
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the
citizens
of
Thailand
(25%)
due to
Thailand
was staying constant for 3 years. In 2000,
Indonesia
rose significantly, and
as a result
, it was the same as the
Philippines
in 2010. In 2010, all
countries
increased but a significant increase was
Indonesia
which exceeded the
Philippines
. The population living in town will rise steadily until 2040. In 2040, the sequence of
countries
with the most people living in town are
Malaysia
(85%),
Indonesia
(60%),
Philippines
(50%), and
Thailand
(45%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, philippines, citizens, malaysia, thailand, indonesia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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