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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of the population living in cities of four Southeast Asian
countries
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 from 1970 to 2020.
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, the graph illustrates the predictions for 2030 and 2040. In general, there were fluctuations in people living in cities compared to the total population. In 1970, the
Philippines
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 had the most
citizens
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 among other
countries
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.
However
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,
Malaysia
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 surpassed the
Philippines
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 after 50 years.
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,
Malaysia
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 is predicted to have the most
citizens
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 among others. The number of
citizens
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 grew from 1970 to 1990 in all
countries
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, especially the
Philippines
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. Urbanisation occurred in the
Philippines
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 from 1980 to 1990, the increase was approximately 20%. The
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citizens
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 of the
Philippines
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 dropped for 2 years and was surpassed by
Malaysia
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 in 1990.
While
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Malaysia
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 experienced sharp growth of almost 15% in 1990,
Thailand
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 remained stable and
Indonesia
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 grew slowly. In 2000,
citizens
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 percentage of
Indonesia
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 was the same
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of
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 the
citizens
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 of
Thailand
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 (25%)
due to
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Thailand
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 was staying constant for 3 years. In 2000,
Indonesia
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 rose significantly, and
as a result
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, it was the same as the
Philippines
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 in 2010. In 2010, all
countries
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 increased but a significant increase was
Indonesia
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 which exceeded the
Philippines
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. The population living in town will rise steadily until 2040. In 2040, the sequence of
countries
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 with the most people living in town are
Malaysia
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 (85%),
Indonesia
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 (60%),
Philippines
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 (50%), and
Thailand
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 (45%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, philippines, citizens, malaysia, thailand, indonesia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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