The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the US
families
who earn five types of the
annual salaries in the three different Correct article usage
apply
period
of the graph shows. Change to a plural noun
periods
Overall
, it can be seen that the huge
disparity Correct article usage
a huge
of
earning more than $100000 and less than $ 50000, Change preposition
between
while
middle salaries of the US families
have the
similar details during the 3 Correct article usage
apply
period
of the graph shows.
In 2007, the amount of the
US Correct article usage
apply
families
who could only earning
less than 25000 Wrong verb form
earn
dollar
and between $25000 and $4999, Change to a plural noun
dollars
which had
25 Verb problem
was
million
and approximately 27 million
respectively. At the same time, people who can earn more than $100000 was the highest during the three period
, which had nearly 30 Change to a plural noun
periods
million
, then
this
figure fluctuated and peaked at close to 35 million
in 2015. Furthermore
, during the $ 50000- $ 74999 families
remained stable from 2007 to 2015, which had approximately 21 million
in this
period
. In addition
, annual income between $ 75000 and $ 99999 families
almost less than a
half with the highest Correct article usage
apply
families
, which had close to 15 million
, around 14 million
and 15 million
during this
period
shows
in Wrong verb form
shown
this
graph.Submitted by ur790609922 on
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