The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the US
families
who earn five types of Use synonyms
the
annual salaries in the three different Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
period
of the graph shows. Change to a plural noun
periods
Overall
, it can be seen that the Linking Words
huge
disparity Correct article usage
a huge
of
earning more than $100000 and less than $ 50000, Change preposition
between
while
middle salaries of the US Linking Words
families
have Use synonyms
the
similar details during the 3 Correct article usage
apply
period
of the graph shows.
In 2007, the amount of Use synonyms
the
US Correct article usage
apply
families
who could Use synonyms
only earning
less than 25000 Wrong verb form
earn
dollar
and between $25000 and $4999, Change to a plural noun
dollars
which had
25 Verb problem
was
million
and approximately 27 Use synonyms
million
respectively. At the same time, people who can earn more than $100000 was the highest during the three Use synonyms
Use synonyms
period
, which had nearly 30 Change to a plural noun
periods
million
, Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
this
figure fluctuated and peaked at close to 35 Linking Words
million
in 2015. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, during the $ 50000- $ 74999 Linking Words
families
remained stable from 2007 to 2015, which had approximately 21 Use synonyms
million
in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
period
. Use synonyms
In addition
, annual income between $ 75000 and $ 99999 Linking Words
families
almost less than Use synonyms
a
half with the highest Correct article usage
apply
families
, which had close to 15 Use synonyms
million
, around 14 Use synonyms
million
and 15 Use synonyms
million
during Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
period
Use synonyms
shows
in Wrong verb form
shown
this
graph.Linking Words
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