The line graph presents three common criminal activities in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.

The graph gives information about the number of usual criminal activities: car theft, house

burgling

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burglary

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, and street robbery in two distinct countries over a period of 35 years, from 1970. At a glance, it

noticeable

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that the total of car theft and house burgling experienced a rise in the given periods, whilst another incident is judged as a stable movement. In terms of

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car theft and house burgling cases, the former number stood at 0.4

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in the initial year and climbed gradually to precisely 1

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in the next 20 years.

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, it reached a peak at 1.6

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cases in 1995 and

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significantly to 1

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of

year

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.

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started at 0.2

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incidents

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it reached the highest case number in 1990 which was 0.7

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following 5 years, it remained stable and dropped gradually to about 0.5

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. In regard to the robbery in

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the street

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, in 1970, the case only accounted for approximately 0.1

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and stabled until 1995. Unfortunately, it witnessed a slight increase to 0.2

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in 2000

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remained constant until the

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year.