The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The given maps provide information about the island before and after the refurbishment of some tourist centres.
Overall
, it can be seen that the Linking Words
country
has been well developed with additional features Use synonyms
such
as restaurants, vehicle tracks and accommodation.
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To begin
with, before the construction of the island, it entailed both seas located not only in the south but Linking Words
also
in the north, Linking Words
in addition
, it had a beach surrounded by a footpath at the west end of the Linking Words
country
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, a myriad of trees were found in the east section of the map but a few were situated in the west. Access to the place was 100 meters.
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By contrast
, after renovation, the Linking Words
country
has been well constructed with additional facilities. Use synonyms
Firstly
, a restaurant Linking Words
as well as
a reception has been built which can be accessed by walking. Linking Words
Secondly
, a plethora of houses has been established making it easy to get to various houses with the help of footpaths. Linking Words
Furthermore
, trees still remained in the same position, Linking Words
nonetheless
, the one in the north has been surrounded by a footpath. Unfortunately, only one sea can be found located in the south. Linking Words
Although
, the beach still remained in the same position, Linking Words
however
, it has been refurbished with swimming. At the south end of the map, a pier has been constructed. Surprisingly, access to the Linking Words
country
still remained 100 meters .Use synonyms
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