The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

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The layout illustrates how the Southwest Airport will change after next year's construction.

Overall

, it is obviously seen that the airport will be expanded remarkably and there will be more gates as compared to now.

However

, the centre of the airport which is the place for security and passport control and the location of the entrance will remain the same.

According to

the plans, the gates region will be developed with more than 10 ones and the new accessibility to the sky train

instead

of a walkway line.

Additionally

, shops will be constructed next to the security.

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the entrance site, there will be two entries for each of the departure and arrival flights.

Also

, in the arrivals site, parking, an ATM and a new cafe will be facilitated. The designer predicts a bag drop place for the departures area.

On the other hand

, security, passport control and customs for both arrivals and departures will not experience any changes.

Although

the departures will have a cafe and check-in areas, the location will change slightly.

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