A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighborhood. In your letter: - Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase - Give the reasons behind your decision to leave - Suggest possible alternative areas that you know
Dear Rakesh, Hope you are doing well, I am writing
this
email regarding that you are planning to purchase a property near my place. This
neighbourhood has many amenities nearby, like a hyper supermarket, playground
for kids & Correct article usage
a playground
adults
and a play school for kids. But I would like you to reconsider it once again before moving to Correct word choice
and adults
this
area.Firstly
, I want to let you know that I am planning to leave this
locality. The main reason behind this
is the increase in crimes in this
neighbourhood. Mostly in the night time
, Correct your spelling
nighttime
this
locale is not so safe for any gender. There have been many cases of robbery is
registered by the police department Unnecessary verb
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couple
of days ago. The reason behind the surge in crime rates might be the slum area which is being developed behind Change the article
a couple
this
neighbourhood and many of them are unemployed.Therefore
, I suggest you planning
a property Wrong verb form
plan
at
some other area. As I am Change preposition
in
also
looking for relocations, I had
met with some real estate agents who Unnecessary verb
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had
guided me with some good gated communities and independent houses. which is located on the other side of the road. Unnecessary verb
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Furthermore
, I had finalised a home at Sri Ram Colony which is nearly 1 Km away, it has a very good security policy for property holders and is more secure for kids to play outside. So, I recommend planning a purchase here. If you require any further
information please call me anytime.Hope to hear from you soonWarm
RegardsSureshCorrect your spelling
soon
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coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear paragraph structure, with each having a single central idea. Avoid blending multiple points in one paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your letter has a consistent logical flow, connecting your ideas effectively with appropriate cohesive devices.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task equally. Dedicate sufficient coverage to each point in the prompt to ensure a complete response.
task achievement
Adapt a tone that is consistently appropriate for the letter format. Formal and semi-formal tones should be used according to the context and relationship with the recipient.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,