the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

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The chart gives some information about the rate of export in a particular country in five different items in

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various years. (2015 and 2016)

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, turning to the given bar chart, the highest level of export belonged to petroleum products and engineered goods is 20l5 and the

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following year,

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textiles had the lowest Figure for

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can be seen exporting, petroleum products ,engineered good and textiles increased in 2016 respectively 3%,8%,5%,15%

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and jewellery exporting decreased compared with the

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year(5.18%)

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global demand
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the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

nowadays the increasing of garbage (waste) is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

some people say that history is one of the most important school subjects. other people say that, in todays world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. give your own opinion regarding this issue.