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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table provides information about forest
land
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 in millions of
hectares
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 in various portions of the globe during 1990, 2000, and 2005, respectively.
Overall
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, it can be seen that arable
land
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 on all the mentioned continents decreased, with the exception of Europe and Asia, where they experienced growth over the period.
First,
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Europe had the largest proportion of forested
land
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 in all the given years;
moreover
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, it experienced growth in
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area
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the area
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 from 989
million
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hectares
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 (1990) to 1001
million
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hectares
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 (2005).
Similarly
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, Aisa
also
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 witnessed growth in
land
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 during 2005;
however
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, it witnessed a decline of 6
million
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hectares
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 in 2000 compared to the first year.
Furthermore
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, Oceania had the least covered
area
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 compared to other nations, which
also
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 witnessed a 3
million
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 hectare decline in 2005. In the second and third years, the forest
area
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 in North America remained at the same 705. South America has the second-largest
area
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, but it
also
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 had the largest decline in the tree-covered
area
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 from 946 in 1990 to 882.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, hectares, area, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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