The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and2016.The table shows the percetages change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and2016.The table shows the percetages change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The two layouts illustrate the current situation of
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the Norbition
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industrial area and its coming changes which may happen in the following years ,as
it
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apply
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can be seen in the maps,there is going to be a vast variation in
general
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structure of
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zone in its future plan.
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, the factories will be destroyed to make way for residential areas and it is supposed to build new districts throughout the site.
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the future design
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the main road will be developed by adding a new square
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into
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to
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the map
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map
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and Some streets will be constructed
along side
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alongside
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the main road,
also
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the region will be
eqquiped
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equipped
with new
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buildings
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building
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buildings
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such
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as
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school
schools
and medical
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,
as well as
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a a
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a
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new bridge for connecting the central road to farmland will be
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created
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to
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, the border of
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and Farmland will
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remain
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unchanged in future
develpment
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development
,
the
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interior design of the industrial area will experience widespread alterations
lateron
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later on
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