The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and2016.The table shows the percetages change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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The two layouts illustrate the current situation of

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industrial area and its coming changes which may happen in the following years ,as

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apply

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can be seen in the maps,there is going to be a vast variation in

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structure of

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zone in its future plan.

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, the factories will be destroyed to make way for residential areas and it is supposed to build new districts throughout the site.

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the future design

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the main road will be developed by adding a new square

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into

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the map

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map

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and Some streets will be constructed

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the main road,

also

the region will be

eqquiped

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equipped

with new

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buildings

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building

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buildings

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such

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school

schools

and medical

center

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as well as

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a a

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new bridge for connecting the central road to farmland will be

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created

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prospective plan.

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, the border of

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and Farmland will

be remained

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remain

have remained

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unchanged in future

develpment

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development

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interior design of the industrial area will experience widespread alterations

lateron

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later on

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