The diagrams show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The diagram depicts the life cycle of

big

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a big

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fish called

salmon

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, broken down into three main stages.

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,

Salmon

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which has varied development stages will

also

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pass three different habitats over the development period. In the beginning,

salmon

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egg

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eggs

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will be placed near

to

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apply

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the small stones and reeds located in the upper river which has slow water movement.

Salmon

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egg

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eggs

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will

be staying

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stay

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there

approximately

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for approximately

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five to six months until

being

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they are

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a

fry

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.

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, the

fry

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which has

3

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a 3

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to 8 cm body length will move to the lower river, and it will take about four years for the

fry

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to stay in

fast flowing

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fast-flowing

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water. When the

fry

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has become a smolt (12 to 15 cm), it will move to another habitat called the open sea.

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it will take time for about five years

living

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to live

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there.

Finally

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, when the salmons are being adult, they will move to the upper river again

for

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to

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lying

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lay

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their eggs.