The bar chart below shows the number of new motorcycles sold by Harley Davidson and BMW between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the total of new motorcycles that
been
sold by Harley Add a missing verb
have been
Davidso
and Correct your spelling
Davidson
BMW
in ten years from 2010 to 2020. In genereal
, it can be seen that there are 2 trends, Harley Correct your spelling
general
Davidso
showed Correct your spelling
Davidson
an
downward trend meanwhile Change the article
a
BMW
experienced an upward trend.
Star with Harley Davidson (HD
) in 2010 reached the
higher Correct article usage
a
number
above 180,000 and descended the next eight years at
100,000 in 2020. Change preposition
to
At
the opposite, Change preposition
On
BMW
started above 80,000 in 2010 and rise
gradually from 2012 to 2020, under 100,000 and at 140,000, respectively.
In 2018, the Wrong verb form
rose
sell
Correct your spelling
cell
number
in Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
HD
and BMW
were
slightly different about 120,000. Meanwhile, even Change the verb form
was
the
trends showed that Correct word choice
though the
HD
experienced fall
Correct article usage
a fall
but
the total Correct word choice
apply
number
still
more than Add a missing verb
was still
BMW
, the higher
Correct word choice
highest
points
in Fix the agreement mistake
point
BMW
was in 2020 ata
140,000 same as the Correct your spelling
at
number
HD
reached in 2016, and the small number
of BMW
sealed was 100,000, just two time less with the higher number
of BMW
sealed.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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