The bar chart below shows the number of new motorcycles sold by Harley Davidson and BMW between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the total of new motorcycles that

been

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sold by Harley

Davidso

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Davidson

and

BMW

in ten years from 2010 to 2020. In

genereal

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general

, it can be seen that there are 2 trends, Harley

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Davidson

showed

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downward trend meanwhile

BMW

experienced an upward trend. Star with Harley Davidson (

) in 2010 reached

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higher

number

above 180,000 and descended the next eight years

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100,000 in 2020.

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the opposite,

BMW

started above 80,000 in 2010 and

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gradually from 2012 to 2020, under 100,000 and at 140,000, respectively. In 2018, the

sell

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cell

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number

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numbers

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and

BMW

were

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slightly different about 120,000. Meanwhile, even

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trends showed that

experienced

fall

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a fall

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but

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apply

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the total

number

still

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was still

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more than

BMW

, the

higher

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highest

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points

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BMW

was in 2020

ata

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140,000 same as the

number

reached in 2016, and the small

number

BMW

sealed was 100,000, just two time less with the higher

number

BMW

sealed.

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