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The two layouts illustrate the current situation of norbition industrial area and its coming changes which may happen in the following years ,as it can be seen in the maps,there is going to be a vast varition in general structure of this zone in its future plan.

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The two layouts illustrate the current situation of
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the norbition
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norbition
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Norbition
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 industrial area and its coming changes which may happen in the following years ,as
it
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apply
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can be seen in the maps,there is going to be a vast
varition
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variation
 in
general
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the general
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 structure of
this
 zone in its future plan.
Overall
 , the factories will be destroyed to make way for residential
area
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areas
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 and it
is suppose
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 to build new districts throughout the site.
According to
 the future design
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,
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the main road will be developed by adding a new square
into
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to
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map
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the map
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 and Some streets will be constructed
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alongside
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along side
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alongside
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 the main road,
also
 the region will be
eqquiped
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equipped
 with new
building
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buildings
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such
 as
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school
schools
schoal
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a schoal
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 and medical
center
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centre
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,
as well as
 a new bridge for connecting the central road to farmland will be
crented
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created
uto
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to
prospective
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the prospective
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 plan.
However
, the border of town and Farmland will
be remained
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remain
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 unchanged in future
develpment
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development
,
the
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and the
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interier
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interior
 design of
industrial
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the industrial
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 area will
exprience
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experience
widesprend
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widespread
 alterations
lateron
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later on
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