The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. 

 

Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The graph and table below illustrate the mean monthly temperatures in degrees
celcius
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celsius
and the mean annual hours of sunshine respectively in London, New York and
Sydney
.
Overall
, it seems that there is no significant correlation between the time
of
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apply
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an area
being
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is
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exposed to the Sun and the reading on
thermometer
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the thermometer
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. The most hours of sunshine is experienced by New York, which is 2,535.
However
, that location is not
hottest
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the hottest
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overall
as the highest temperature is recorded between May and September,
the
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period of only 5 months long. Meanwhile, London, despite having significantly less time experiencing sunlight (1,180), is warmer than New York between December and March.
Nevertheless
, the New Yorkers undergo the highest peak temperature of about 30 degrees. The hottest megapolis out of these three is certainly
Sydney
. The thermometer reading fluctuates in
15
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the 15
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-25 degrees
celcius
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celsius
range and is the highest during the rest of the year. Interestingly, when it is the warmest in Australia, it is the coldest in
UK
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the UK
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and USA. The peak reading in
Sydney
, which is just above 25, was recorded in January. In spite of being the warmest place out of three,
Sydney
receives sunlight in
slightly
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a slightly
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smaller period, than its American counterpart.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperature
  • temperature fluctuations
  • range
  • significant differences
  • average number of hours of sunshine per year
  • highlight
  • relate
  • patterns
  • comparisons
  • major cities
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