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The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The table illustrates the information about
cost
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the cost
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 of water in 5 cities in Australia.
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 given five
Australia
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Australian
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 cities the highest cost in
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change
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 per
kiloliter
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 up to 125
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sydney
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Perth
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average
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 bill per household is
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usage
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kiloliter
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 ( over 125
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 ) and average bill per
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household
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 in these titles the highest level of
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KL
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 is Sydney and the lowest is Adelaide and
Perth
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 the high level is
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 and the lowest is Melbourne and the
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 average bill per house hold the highest level of
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citie
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city
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 with $332 and the lowest is Melbourne with $253.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usage, change, kiloliter, kl, perth with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cost
  • water consumption
  • billing method
  • variation
  • historical trends
  • outlier
  • price range
  • anomalies
  • regional factor
  • summarise
  • identify
  • compare
  • expensive
  • least expensive
  • main features
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