You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. In the letter, you should: • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am
writting
in order to complaint about your Correct your spelling
writing
hotel
's some
problems, These will Correct quantifier usage
apply
be bother
me. Some tools do not work well. Dust is not cleaned.
In 2023, On Change the verb form
bother
the
September 3rd, I stayed Correct article usage
apply
"Tanho"
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at "Tanho"
hotel
for participating
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to participate
our
Change preposition
in our
work's
conference. But, In Change noun form
work
this
hotel
,
After coming, The lightening turned off at
least Change preposition
for at
at
one Change preposition
apply
hours
. Through Change to a singular noun
hour
this
time, I could not work out my task, which was related to my job. Heating water was not brought until this
time. In addition
, Some insects were found by me, While
I was sleeping, Beforehand, Ants entered my ears. It was awful
and Correct article usage
an awful
strengable
condition for me. After breathing with dusk, My allergy Correct your spelling
strenuous
was happened
.
I consider that Change to the active voice
happened
has happened
Due to
like this
situations, you should give aplogise
. Correct your spelling
apologise
Together with
this
, you must amend your drawbacks, That
is depend
on your Change the verb form
depends
hotel
. Please, focus on cleaning and If like these thing
are controlled Change the determiner
things
also
some insects does not come.
I assume that it will be fixed
all Wrong verb form
fix
problems
that I have said recently examples.
Best wishes,
Jumayeva Sarvinoz.Correct article usage
the problems
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure to clearly outline the main points of complaint related to your hotel stay, with each issue discussed in a separate paragraph.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use appropriate greetings and closing phrases in the letter. Always begin with a formal greeting and end with a polite closing.
Task Achievement
Aim for accurate spelling and grammatical structures. Avoid run-on sentences, fragments, and ensure punctuation is correct.
Task Achievement
Maintain a formal tone throughout your letter. Avoid casual language when addressing an official complaint to hotel management.