The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart outlines the

percentage

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and drinking habits of

coffee

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in five

cities

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in Australia. In Australia the big

cities

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like Sydney,

Melborune

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Melbourne

,

Hobart

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etc., In

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cities

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the pie chart shows the

percentage

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of

coffee

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bought and

also

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it shows

how

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apply

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many

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of people

went

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who went

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to

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cafe

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a cafe

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for

coffee

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or tea in the

last

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4 weeks. The first

city

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is Sydney. In the past 4

weeks

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weeks,

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people

consume

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more

coffee

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and tea in the

cafe

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and the

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is 60%. It is higher than the

cofee

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coffee

and

instant

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coffee

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. The second

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is Adelaide in

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city

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the

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of

instant

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coffee

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is higher it is quite different than

other

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four

cities

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. Because in that

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cities

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cities,

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the

cafe

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percentage

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is higher. But in Adelaide it is different. The

consume

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consumption

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of

instant

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coffee

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is

more

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higher than

the

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that

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coffee

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of coffee

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and

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cafe

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cafes

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. The

overall

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instant

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cofee

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coffee

percenatge

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percentage

is 50%. The

cities

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like

Meloburne

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Melbourne

,

Hobart

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and Brisbane. In

Birsbane

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Brisbane

the

cafe

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percentage

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is 55%

comparig

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comparing

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the Melbourne and

Habart

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Hobart

the

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was 65%. The

consume

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consumption

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of fresh

coffee

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is higher in Sydney

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.

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to Melbourne and

Hobart

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cities

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,

Hobart

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has

the

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a

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higher

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in

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of

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instant

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coffee

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than Melbourne.