The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart outlines the
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cities
in Australia.
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cities
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Hobart
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of people Use synonyms
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a cafe
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4 weeks.
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coffee
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percentage
is 60%. It is higher than the Use synonyms
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overall
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cofee
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coffee
percenatge
is 50%.
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percentage
cities
like Use synonyms
Meloburne
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Melbourne
Hobart
and Brisbane. In Use synonyms
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Brisbane
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compared
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Hobart
percentage
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