The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart outlines the

percentage

and drinking habits of

coffee

in five

cities

in Australia. In Australia the big

cities

like Sydney,

Melborune

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Melbourne

,

Hobart

etc., In

this

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these

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cities

the pie chart shows the

percentage

of

coffee

bought and

also

it shows

how

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apply

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many

percentage

of people

went

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who went

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to

cafe

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a cafe

the cafe

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for

coffee

or tea in the

last

4 weeks. The first

city

is Sydney. In the past 4

weeks

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weeks,

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people

consume

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have consumed

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more

coffee

and tea in the

cafe

and the

percentage

is 60%. It is higher than the

cofee

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coffee

and

instant

coffee

. The second

city

is Adelaide in

this

city

the

percentage

of

instant

coffee

is higher it is quite different than

other

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the other

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four

cities

. Because in that

cities

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cities,

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the

cafe

percentage

is higher. But in Adelaide it is different. The

consume

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consumption

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of

instant

coffee

is

more

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apply

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higher than

the

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that

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coffee

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of coffee

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and

cafe

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cafes

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. The

overall

instant

cofee

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coffee

percenatge

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percentage

is 50%. The

cities

like

Meloburne

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Melbourne

,

Hobart

and Brisbane. In

Birsbane

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Brisbane

the

cafe

percentage

is 55%

comparig

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comparing

compared

the Melbourne and

Habart

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Hobart

the

percentage

was 65%. The

consume

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consumption

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of fresh

coffee

is higher in Sydney

city

.

Comparing

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Compared

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to Melbourne and

Hobart

cities

,

Hobart

has

the

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a

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higher

percentage

in

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of

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instant

coffee

than Melbourne.