The graph below shows the spending of UK residents on visits abroad between 1993 and 2013
The line graph depicts the UK citizen’s expenditure on four activity categories when
traveling
overseas over a span of 20 Change the spelling
travelling
years
, from 1993.
At a glance, it is noticeable that all of the spending on distinct types experienced a rise, but the type of each rising is different in regard to the given years
.
In terms of the highest spending, the amount of money which spent
on holiday stood at precisely £9 Add a missing verb
was spent
billion
in initial
Add an article
the initial
year
and reached a peak at about £25 billion
in 2008. It then
fluctuated in the next 5 years
and stopped in
just under £24 Change preposition
at
billion
.
In regard to the three lowest expenditures, in Correct article usage
the initial
initial
Correct article usage
the initial
year
, about £2 billion
was spent on business but this
number grew slightly by approximately £2 billion
in 2003,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
dropped marginally to about £5 billion
at the end
of the period. Subsequently
, UK people who visited their friends or relatives spent approximately £2 billion
in first
Change the article
the first
year
, climbed
gradually and stood at Correct pronoun usage
which climbed
near
£5 Change the word
nearly
billion
in 2013. In contrast
with miscellaneous activities, which started at just under £2 billion
in 1993 and fluctuated in the following years
. This
number then
stabilized until last
year
.Submitted by e.warikar on
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